revising as I reread knowing what I know at 120 solid pgs in a row and blocked to end of chapter six of expected ten.  2pm afraid the characters are all unconvincingly interested in the same or overlapping things which I don’t know whether I can justify with a birds of a feather argument, a coherent perspective of novel argument, or self-conscious aspect of the novel argument, or bossy narrator aspect of novel argument.  Or if I can do it at all.

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